It was Sunday morning and the sun was glistening in the
sky. I got up and remembered I had a 2 hour hack, so I jumped up out of bed and
quickly got dressed and picked up my gear. When I was finally ready, I saw mum
waiting at the door tapping at her watch, I knew I had to hurry so I skipped
breakfast and quickly went out the door. We had just made it in time for us to
just have a look at all the ponies/horses in there stalls before I went on the
hack. There were loads of horses, all different colours and breeds, but there
was one that stood out from all the rest, she was a bay with white socks and
had a slightly darker mane and tail, her name was Tommy and
she was beautiful. As we headed towards the yard office we saw a tall skinny
lady coming towards us, she had a very pale face and long fine blonde hair. She
asked if we were here for the 2 hour hack, and if we knew which horse I was
riding, I answered back saying that I was here for the 2 hour hack and that I
have no idea who I was riding. The lady disappeared into one of the rooms,
while I waited patiently outside in the cold breeze. Finally the lady came out
of the room and got Tommy out of her stable; she looked at me and said this is
the pony that you will be riding today. So I climbed onto the mounting block
and jumped onto her (Tommy). I was waiting for my instructor to get on her
horse and then we would be ready to go.
As we set off I saw my mum waving goodbye, I gave her a
wave back and mimed see you later.
Ella and I took a short cut onto a very narrow road and
then we went back onto the moors that lead back to the campsite. As we were
slowly walking through the heather, Tommy pulled her head down to get some of
the fresh green grass. I quickly pulled up my reins as we were just about to go
into trot. We were entering the woodland which had very narrow tracks and was
very high up from the ground. When we were walking along I had to steer Tommy
the right way else we could fall down 40 feet down a big drop. I kept looking
at the floor to check that we were not too close to the edge, at one point I
had to jump over a tree trunk as it was the only way to get past. We had
finally got through the dangerous part of the woods and started going down a
steep hill that lead to a road. Tommy had started trotting when we was going
down the hill, I grabbed onto the saddle as she would not stop and then broke
into gallop. I had lost both of my stirrups so I had to hold on for dear life,
I could hear Ella behind me shouting “hold on Gemma im coming”. Tommy finally
stopped because Ella had grabbed hold of my reins and calmed her down. Ella
reckoned that she spooked at a rabbit or bird in the hedge, so I gave her a pat
on the neck and spoke to her. Now we had to quickly hurry as time was running
out, we had to go into trot. Tommy and I had to canter to catch up because
Ella’s horse was going to fast for Tommy’s little legs. We had to go on the
road as the track stopped at a dead end so we had to turn off onto the road
which was about 5 minutes away from the campsite. When we turned the last
corner I could see my mum waiting for me by the gate, she didn’t spot me until
she heard the horse’s hooves on the floor. I jumped off and thanked Ella for
the lovely and interesting ride. After I got off I put Tommy away in her stable
and gave her a little treat, I quickly un tacked her and shut the stable door.
A little girl came over and took the tack away for me. As I left the yard I
looked back and saw Tommy looking at me, she gave me a neigh and tossed her
head side to side, I gave her a wave back and said thank you.
By Gemma Curtis x
Very good Gemma. I wonder if you read your wok back to yourself? There are a few spelling errors and you have used im instead of I'm. DeArs, should be deErs :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this. Your main target is paragraphing (as these are a bit long and dense) and reading your work back. Well done.