“Hey you
boys” said Dad “come and help me get it off.”
There we
were, looking at him, trying to get it off.
Little kids started coming in, dad was laughing. We went into help but we couldn’t get it off,
this was ten minutes after. We then let
all the air out it slipped off.
“That was so embarrassing” Dad said
“especially when all the children came in to play football in the water and I
was in there way.”
There was a
big red line right round his belly and back.
That night dad blew it up for the next morning.
The next day I said to Dad “I think you had
better stay on the sunbed today and have a rest, you don’t want to embarrass
yourself again.” The temperatures were hot by day, and night.
We went to
the clothes market down the road the next day me and dad went one way around
the market and mum and Jas the other. We were looking at shoes and t-shirts. My
legs were hurting walking around the market however time went fast. It was time
to go we phoned each other and said meet at the black avenue (the avenues were
colour coordinated) so we did and so did mum. I and dad were hungry. I said
“where are they I’m starving.” “Me to” said Dad. We phoned each other and said
“where are you. “We asked the member off public and they said there are two
black avenues north and south after a twenty minute detour we found each other
and went back to the hotel for some dinner.
BY DAN HEARD
Good opening paragraph. Some complex sentences at work!
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